I wrote a story, and i need feedback on if it’s good or not. I’m getting close to finishing it! I’m Super Excited. If you’re bored you should check it out!

http://lovestorynotcontainingvampires.webs.com/

Haha, i give up on the letters lol.

School starts tomorrow, yuppp.

Keep it real

Hayden!!!

Hey buddy! I met you on xbox live, kind of the internet…Haha but we spent a great like 6 hours talking!!! even though you are 14 and live in Nevada i felt like we made a connection. You texted me and it got weird. haha i didnt expect you to be that interested. uhmm move on we live to far away, if it works out in the future thats great but i highly doubt that it will.

Keep it Real. Yo. Hipity Hoppin it.

Sage,

wow we lasted a whole three weeks! I knew you were going to play me from the start. I went along with it anyway. My fault. I mean you didn’t have to fill my head with all those lies about us being together, i always knew it was bullshit but i tried to make myself believe it. Well we’re done, your loss. You used me, i hope you feel great about that! Well i’m off the better things =)

Keep it real,

Emmmiiiillllllllyyyyyy

Whyyy Hello. =) I’m Emily. Let me tell you about myself.

All my friends say im crazy but i like the term always has a good time. I’m hyper and talkative. I’m very jumpy and i move around a lot. I enjoy spending time with my friends and i’m the one everyone wants to be there to make things funner.

If you are not my friend i act different- I am shy and awkward. I try not to show my true self in fear that you would like i am strange. Which i am. I sit back and watch as people conversate. Then my friends always say, why are you so shy?! I laugh and say i dont know.

I am afraid of people. I don’t really like meeting new people or hanging with someone i don’t know. I’m pretty friendly i just dont know why i am that way….

Dear Dreams,

How i hate to sleep on the right side of my body, it is the most comfortable for me, yet you cannot visit often. =/ I am glad however because you cannot fill my head with untrue things. I like to keep it real and you make me stray from the path. Yet a few dreams would be nice now and then. =)

Left side- Hi, I rarely ever get to see my dreams over here but i enjoy them when i do. Falling back asleep in the morning is when you often visit, you make me smile. I dream of boys and love. I get out of bed in the morning and feel great =)

Bad Dream- You know who you are. You know what you make me do. I wake up crying because of the horror that you show me. Would i ever do something like that? I know it’s an awful thing to think about, but i will admit that some days i wanted it just to be over. I haven’t seen you in a while but i hope it stays that way.

Keep it real for now. Lates.

BUVVER! I love you no doubt. Our relationship has not changed since we were kids. We have sooooo much fun together then we fight like all normal brother and sister. I know im not perfect but when you call me useless, worthless, and lazy it really gets to me. You are stange and fun but you really are a great guy, i admire you a lot. Happy 21st Birthday!!!!!! Love you bub.

Mom,

You make me so angry! I want to be able to have a conversation with you and not get pissed! You have never been there for me it was always me and dad. He was my rock, you were nothing to me. I honestly don’t think we ever spent anytime together, You don’t even know how upset this makes me to write this! Your a good person you really are, just to everyone else. I’m the same exact way, i am rude and hateful to you, but i’m really nice and sweet to everyone else. I know you, but you know absolutly nothing about me. You are never home, but then you think its wrong for me to never be home. Honestly you are the biggest hypocrite i have ever met. You need a reality check or just look in the mirror sometime.

Dad,

You were everything to me. I never told you that. Family event suck so bad now, you were the one i would hang all over and you would pull your lame jokes on me. I wasn’t the best daughter i know that, we fought on a daily basis. A good friend told me to not regret anything, to let it go.

These are the things i am letting go.

1.)I know i was 16 when you got sick, and when you were dying i couldn’t sit by you.

2.) I rarely went to see you in the hospital.

3.) Even up to your last days i fought you.

4.) In my lifetime i only hugged you a few times.

5.) I underestimated the impact you had on my life.

6.)I never told you i loved you….

Sage Whorl,

* You along with jaime also have a pretty name*

Let’s start with the good. I love spending time with you like for real. We have a lot in common and i love talking to you. You are really trying to show me that you want to be with me and i’m starting to believe you. You’re a really sweet guy and i like you a lot….

The Bad…You keep telling me that you want to get to know me, well make an effort…Lets just sit and talk turn off the tv and no kissing, just speak to me. Tell me about yourself and ill tell you about me. I hate how we can be intimate but you can’t even call me your girlfriend. Your Reputation.

The Ugly- You ruined a good relationship with my friend (Mostly my fault) None of my friends care for you because you’re an asshole.